My speech!

This is my speech do you like it, our hapu groups are presenting our speeches on Friday 2 block.
Here is my speech:

My topic is: why we should use minecraft for education

My question or opinion is: we should use minecraft for education

My Introduction:

Did you know that some schools use minecraft for education? Today I will tell you why I think this school should use minecraft for education. Besides people say minecraft is used for education because it helps with social life, math, English and teaches you about what things are made out off. Do you thinks it's weird how this school doesn't use minecraft for education. Well in this speech I will tell you why this school should use minecraft for education and will be telling you 3 reasons why 1.3000 other schools in the world use it for education 2. Minecraft is a world famous game and has sold more than 20 million copies from 2009-2015 and in the last 24 hours 10 thousand copies or more have been sold and 3. It will help you if you if you're creative and want to learn how to build. Hundreds of schools are named after minecraft like a Swedish school is called mojang because that's where two students made minecraft and named it cave game. Now I will tell you why we should use minecraft for education

My first idea is that we should use Minecraft for education because 3000 schools in the world use minecraft for education and we can join them if they’re using it that means it’s good for education and it will to help us  to learn, another thing why we should use minecraft for education is because schools like it and if 3000 school like it maybe this school will like it.  If you want to be an engineer it teaches you basic skill of how to set-up things with redstone and teaches you the basic skills of how redstone works.

I also think we should use Minecraft for education because it is a world famous game and has sold more than 20 million have been sold and more than 10 thousand copies have been sold in the last 24 hours so if it’s world famous that means it must be well-known by even people that don’t have minecraft

My third idea with examples/proof: We should use Minecraft for education because it will help you if you if you're creative and want to learn how to build… But it's the easy way if you want to be a builder, we will become very creative and learn how to make a garden and build a house or even a statue. Children will be very creative which is good when we need new ideas but bad-ish if we're learning and we’re talking about this educational game.

My Conclusion

For these reasons do you want to use minecraft for education? I think I really want to use minecraft for education. As you know we should use minecraft for education because 1. 3000 other schools in the world use it for education and 2. Minecraft is a world famous game and has sold more 20 million copies and 3. It will help you if you if you're creative and want to learn how to build. I now hope you know why I think this school really should use minecraft for education.